I got all three endings and I gotta say, I enjoyed myself a lot more then I thought. it's a well fleshed out demo, and Friend is such a dreamboat! I'll definitely be going with the boyfriend route first haha
The only critique I have is the same as one of the comments below. Just a few changes in dialogue to make it more gender neutral, because it does feel like MC is a female even when you choose the male options.
Good job! I'm so excited for the next update, do you plan on releasing this game in full or doing it day by day? :)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the game!! The next update will definitely have more gender-neutral writing to it, and I appreciate the feedback!
I plan on releasing it in Chapters! The demo is basically Chapter 0. I have the whole game synopsis written down chapter by chapter, from beginning to end. :D
So... I've gotten "Friend" and "Boyfriend". I'm scared to go for number three? I imagine I have to be super stand-offish to dear ol' Friend.
I was done such a spook by what happened when we were walking home from work??? I AM DONE A FRIGHTEN. But, also super excited to keep watching this game develop!
I think the game is great! I like the story and characters! I will voice one critique which is with the writing of the mc.
I played male and female for it to compare, and I did notice that rather than leaning for a more gender neutral mc/mc interactions. It does feel like you've written this only with a female mc or an mc who only has female parts in mind which does kinda take from the experience if you're cis male or a noncis female player (especially for the nsfw scene). Some fixes for this could simply some slight changes to dialogue. Like in the nsfw scene instead of 'cum on my dick' it could be 'cum on me baby' another alteration could be adding a dress 'cool' option along with cute. These are just some suggestions to give it more of an inclusive feel for all genders/sexes! It's all good if you don't want to make changes like that, these are just some suggestions/critiques! Great vn other than that, I really enjoyed it.
chdbajh i'm hyppppped i usually dislike choosing the mean choices but doing all route are worth it!p
ursing my lips bcs i don't wanna spoil more!
anyways, there's a scene where MC gonna go and change after coming back from work/date and they said "tossing away the uncomfortable uniform" instead of the current clothes they are wearing! hope this help!
Absolutely a wonderful experience! I can't wait to see more!
Also for the driving scene, for the to images going between him opening his mouth and closing it, I noticed the whites of Friend's eyes for one only went up to the iris and the other it went past if that makes any sense.
Uwaa(*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) I enjoyed it. When I saw the figure above the bookshelf, I was like "Ooh, this guy look familiar like Alan holding hatchet." And when I clicked it, it really is! Lmao. I enjoyed the game, I hope we could see more about them like their back stories of how they met, why he's so obsessed and ya know. The aftermath:'3 I choose that thing last and holy cow. Thankfully I'm alone xD
UPDATE- I PLAYED IT YAHOOOOOOOOOO AFTER WAITING FOR SO LONG. I am nothing but glad I did. I really love Friend's layers. I really enjoyed his snapping out of his silly character. His longing was evident for the MC, but I am really curious about Friend's backstory...
Interesting concept of not being able to save or load. I really look forward to playing this demo.
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I got all three endings and I gotta say, I enjoyed myself a lot more then I thought. it's a well fleshed out demo, and Friend is such a dreamboat! I'll definitely be going with the boyfriend route first haha
The only critique I have is the same as one of the comments below. Just a few changes in dialogue to make it more gender neutral, because it does feel like MC is a female even when you choose the male options.
Good job! I'm so excited for the next update, do you plan on releasing this game in full or doing it day by day? :)
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the game!! The next update will definitely have more gender-neutral writing to it, and I appreciate the feedback!
I plan on releasing it in Chapters! The demo is basically Chapter 0. I have the whole game synopsis written down chapter by chapter, from beginning to end. :D
This is such an amazing game! Thank you for blessing us with this masterpiece, Friend has my heart <3 You've done an amazing job 💕❤️
So... I've gotten "Friend" and "Boyfriend". I'm scared to go for number three? I imagine I have to be super stand-offish to dear ol' Friend.
I was done such a spook by what happened when we were walking home from work??? I AM DONE A FRIGHTEN. But, also super excited to keep watching this game develop!
This is so cute and Friend is absolutely adorable!! Thanks for making this :3
I think the game is great! I like the story and characters! I will voice one critique which is with the writing of the mc.
I played male and female for it to compare, and I did notice that rather than leaning for a more gender neutral mc/mc interactions. It does feel like you've written this only with a female mc or an mc who only has female parts in mind which does kinda take from the experience if you're cis male or a noncis female player (especially for the nsfw scene). Some fixes for this could simply some slight changes to dialogue. Like in the nsfw scene instead of 'cum on my dick' it could be 'cum on me baby' another alteration could be adding a dress 'cool' option along with cute. These are just some suggestions to give it more of an inclusive feel for all genders/sexes! It's all good if you don't want to make changes like that, these are just some suggestions/critiques! Great vn other than that, I really enjoyed it.
Ah, thank you for the feedback!! I'm glad you enjoyed the game and I will fix the writing on the next update!
This is very well done! The visuals are fantastic and I can't wait for more! :D
God he's sooooooo cute! Can't wait to see more!
I love crusty crunchy men omg
chdbajh i'm hyppppped i usually dislike choosing the mean choices but doing all route are worth it!p
ursing my lips bcs i don't wanna spoil more!
anyways, there's a scene where MC gonna go and change after coming back from work/date and they said "tossing away the uncomfortable uniform" instead of the current clothes they are wearing! hope this help!
Ah, gotcha!! Thank you! I'll definitely fix that when I get the chance!
THIS IS AM AMAZING GAME BY AN AMAZING PERSON!!! AHHHHH I LOVE FRIEND SO MUCH!
AGALAHAFAV YOURE AN AMAZING PERSON AND I ADMIRE YOU
I ADMIRE YOU THE MOSTEST! AND IM SO HAPPY I GET TO CALL YOU MY FRIEND. YOU'RE SO FREAKING TALENTED!!! <3
Absolutely a wonderful experience! I can't wait to see more!
Also for the driving scene, for the to images going between him opening his mouth and closing it, I noticed the whites of Friend's eyes for one only went up to the iris and the other it went past if that makes any sense.
AH thank you for letting me know!! And I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!
i've gorged on literally every media involving this man lmao
looking forward to the demo:D!<33
Can't wait for the demo to be released!! (It's a lie, I'll wait patiently dw, don't be pressured!!)
Uwaa(*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) I enjoyed it. When I saw the figure above the bookshelf, I was like "Ooh, this guy look familiar like Alan holding hatchet." And when I clicked it, it really is! Lmao. I enjoyed the game, I hope we could see more about them like their back stories of how they met, why he's so obsessed and ya know. The aftermath:'3 I choose that thing last and holy cow. Thankfully I'm alone xD
*heavy breathing* my hype for this game cannot be contained.
UPDATE- I PLAYED IT YAHOOOOOOOOOO AFTER WAITING FOR SO LONG. I am nothing but glad I did. I really love Friend's layers. I really enjoyed his snapping out of his silly character. His longing was evident for the MC, but I am really curious about Friend's backstory...
Interesting concept of not being able to save or load. I really look forward to playing this demo.
*sits and waits patiently for demo*
Hype hype hype hype!! So excited for release
Ahhh, esperando con ansias el juego!!!:D